A Change of plan...

It seemed like a good plan at the time...making this LO for a challenge, however I was not happy with it, so I made some changes, and like it much better now. Will I ever love it? Maybe not. And time will tell if it will make it into the printed book like this. I may yet scrap the whole thing and start over.

The first version :

...and once I tweaked it :

Do you ever redo or partially redo, a LO?